Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 3 and my teacher is Miss Lover. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, April 16, 2020
How can I give back to my community?
First I had to get the vacum cleaner from the cupboard and plug it in then I started vacuming. I tried to do a great job but my arms got so tired and sore. When I was finished I put it away again.
I felt proud because I did a good job and Mum and Dad were happy with me because the place was nice and tidy before school started.
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Well done Monica! What a great job you have done for your family. You have described your writing recount very well, thank you for sharing. The challenge now is to keep your house tidy - good luck!
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea of service for your mum and dad. I totally understand about your arms getting tired as you really need to push hard to get the dust up.
Do you think this would be something you would want to do again?
hi Monica I really like your story I am really looking forward to seeing you again from Indiana.
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