Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 3 and my teacher is Miss Lover. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, April 3, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
that is a great story Monica. What have you been doing? from Zoe
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DeleteHi Monica
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative story. This story reminds me of lots of different fairy tales all joined together. I like that it had a happy ending.
If you are bored you should do some art work for your story and put it up.
I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Hi Monica
ReplyDeleteI like the name of your fairy 'Sparkle Girl' - I am interested to see what she looks like - please do a piece of art like Mrs Simanu said. I look forward to seeing it!
Miss Gill.
That’s a beautiful love story
ReplyDeletegreat job. Zoe
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DeleteHi Monica. Great story. From Mila.
ReplyDeleteThank you
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